if i died tonight...
would you take a carnation
from my flowers
to give to her?
if i died tonight...
would you even remember
that we had plans
for saturday?
for saturday?
i'm still confused why
i'm so mad at you.
if you died tonight...
i still couldn't
talk to your mom.
if you die tonight
please don't
watch over me
from heaven.
i'd be so embarrassed.
if we both die tonight...
can we still
hang out
saturday?
saturday?
I love this so much <3 Your writing style is so fluid yet, disconjunct. Also I enjoy your message, it really hits home for me. It's also very creative, the repetition of the theme, "if I died" "if you died" "if we died" adds this whole new level to the poem. Also, that last stanza is so cute.
ReplyDeleteI went back and read some of your other posts and I really like what you write. Its so real, honest, yet hidden, like a secret. Discrete.
I love this so much <3 Your writing style is so fluid yet, disconjunct. Also I enjoy your message, it really hits home for me. It's also very creative, the repetition of the theme, "if I died" "if you died" "if we died" adds this whole new level to the poem. Also, that last stanza is so cute.
ReplyDeleteI went back and read some of your other posts and I really like what you write. Its so real, honest, yet hidden, like a secret. Discrete.
This. Was perfection. Why I don't read your blog every single day of my life.....well I will now!
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